Footsteps

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You can read it on Zeldafan.net, where I posted it. No, it's not any sort of fan fiction. Just a charming little story about a nice guy playing in the forest. =D

Read it here: http://ganondorf333.zeldafan.net/fiction/29/Footsteps.htm

Comment, please, on both Zeldafan.net and this topic. =D

I may type up some of the others I've written and post them here, too.

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Good job! Is that your first story you've posted here G333?

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It's the first one I've posted on the forums, but the second one I've typed up. The first one I've typed up is a much bloodier, unsophisticated story with no backbone, so I'm revising it to make it better. It's on Myhyrule if you want to read the first version- called "Wall". It's in wall-of-text form, so be wary of its lack of structural integrity (I'm also going to separate it into proper paragraphs). So, yeah, I'm changing that one up; also, all the short stories I write like this are going to have simple, one-to-two-word titles. And this is why they have simple, one-to-two-word titles. '~'

I'm also writing more short stories, a four-novel series, two novellas, and a fan fiction. =D

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Dude, that was awesome, and only mostly disturbing! :thumbup:

Conveniently, I'm about to go to bed. I think I'm going to have weird dreams. XD

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A very nice read, I like the wording you used to describe his feelings and emotions while he was being followed; it's those kind of things that really bring a piece of writing to life in the mind of the reader. Good job!

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Your writing style reminds me of that of H.P. Lovecraft. I enjoyed reading it, though.

I like stories that explore what happens to the human mind when under extreme conditions.

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