JayRAWR1
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Assassin in Italy, family killed, goes to doctor? This is the plot of assassin's creed II so far...
Basically I'm writing a story that referres to assassins creed 2 cuz I love that game but it's obviously going to be different.
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Prolouge:
In the times of the third era there was a young boy named Jin he was no odinary boy, he was a special boy. He lives with the fierce and great Daste family, the daste are special
they're heroes and assassins. Jin lives with his faithful family in Venezia (Venice), he has heard about many other assassins who used to roam the lands of Italy. Though one early morning he woke up to see his family dead. Jin was gutted.
Chapter 1: Contract
Year: 1534 May 3rd.
Jin woke up crying in pain as he had a bad migrane, the only way he would get better is by a doctor in town. He opened his wardrobe and put his usual clothes on and walked out
of the house, as he was walking to the doctor he bumped in with Viller de Pate's gang. ''Ahha! we meet again jin sorry to hear your family died HAHAHAHA!!!!'' Viller shouted. ''I have no time for your nonsense Viller I have a pounding headace so if you don't mind can you please move out of the bloody way!'' said Jin. Viller replied ''If that's the way you want it to be, i'll be back, come on gang'' jin had a tear running down his face because of his family. Jin walked on and found the doctor standing next to its usual stalls. ''Hi there sir jin! how may I help you?''. Jin replied ''I have a darn headace and I need healing what medication have you got?''
What do you think so far?
I have no title yet I am afraid. Suggestions would be great.
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Unwanted Pain
Prolouge.
Gone are the day's of peace, war has came once again...
this is is a tale of a boy who grows up to be a hero.
Want's to explore the mountains, streets, village's,
may his wish come true? One thing was strange he didn't have a name and he couldn't speak.
Chapter 1: First Day Of Sword Training.
"Oi! you boy!, get up it's yer first day sword training at the 'Temple of Swords"
He didn't want to get up, it was 5:00 in the morning. The boy woke up, alll tires and gloomy looking.
''CMON!'' Shouted The Temple Of Swords Guard. When the boy got dressed, he couldn't move his feet, felt absolutely numb.
He struggled walking to the temple, ''C'mon mate get a move on'' the guard frowned, the boy reached The Enormous Temple, it was beautiful, red and blue flower's planted everywhere.
Professional Swordmen greeted the boy when he walked into the temple nervously, distracted by all
the Master Swords and Steel Swords And Iron Sword and the bad swords known as 'Rusty Swords'
What do you think of it so far?
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Sorry to say this but don't bother posting anymore, your story sucks.
Oh sorry, i tried my best dont get angry. This site makes me sick a few time's i feel left-out i might leave this site. People hate me including you.
Its not my fault either if i made a poo story, i was tired. Before posting read it carefully. Also dont post poo comments either. Atleast give me a point. -
You're missing about 5 games, my friend. o:
Poll List Is Done
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Chapter 1: Zelda
In links cottage, he was getting ready, to go to Princess Zelda's lovely castle to collect the evil banes sword, The Sword Of Time. The little fairy boy and navi the fairy set off to the castle, on the way they met saria. Saria, was a rivvi like link. ''Hey, link where you going?''. The fairy boy replied ''Link: Me and navi are off to see zelda for something really important.'' Saria, was shocked wondering why link had to leave the rivii forest to meet zelda for something important, link walked on and on, to get too zelda's castle.
As link, arrived as the castle he saw guards. Navi distracted the gaurds so link can approximately past. Link walked through the gates of the castle where he met the lovely princess zelda, ''Zelda: link i'm so glad you arrived, i got worried'' Zelda showed link the 'Sword Of Time' ''Zelda: Here you go link, this is a gift from me'' link thankyoued. As link grabbed the might fierce sword, ganondorf arrived.
''Ganondorf: What's this heh heh The Sword Of Time? ive been looking for that for 20 years heh heh and here it is mwuhahahahaha'' Ganondorf snatched the mighty sword of link. ''Ganondorf: Now i can use this to get the triforce AHAAHAAHAHAHAHA''
Link grabbed his rivii sword and aimed for ganon but as soon the little boy was about to hit ganon, the evil man knocked him to the ground.
Sorry icve only posted chapter 1 at the mo illl put on chapter 2 later
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You're missing about 5 games, my friend. o:
Sorry, had to go to school so i didn't have time i'll finish it off later, thankyou for posting anyway
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I saw a few rumor's on youtube there will be a new zelda wii game in 2010 i'll give to link to what the cover will look like here : http://media.photobucket.com/image/new%20zelda%20game%202010/sportslegends/111AAA/zelda_new.jpg
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Proluge:
There was, a boy named link (Link) a boy who defeated the power's of the evil
He defeated creatures, me sheik will reveal the name's.
First The Evil One Of All Ganondorf And the 2nd Vatii, and the 3rd Majoras Mask
but now the world is in ganondorf's hand, will link stop him once again and gain the triforce
let's see...
The Legend Of Zelda: Ganondorf's Revenge.
Chapter One: Saria.
As, link woke from his nightmare,
he felt all weasy and drained down. Link forgot! he had to visit saria in her, warm cottage.
Link ran outside, it smelt lovely. Link climbed down his dingy, dirty gooey ladder and ran and ran to saria's house. As he ran mido came and tripped link up. Link's tunic got filled with mud, and mido laughed. Saria came storming outside of her cottage, and told mido to aploigize to link. Mido aploigized and ran back to his gruesome cottage... ''Saria: Are you ok Link? that meany mido'' saria helped link back up, and they walked into 'Sarias' cottage. As link and saria got in there they sat at a small tiny table, with two dusty chair's and the table all dirty. Saria asked link to do a little quest for her witch was to get her, the kokiri sword. Link nodded, and before he went to go get the sword, he hugged saria as if they were best best friend's... Link stormed out of sarias house to begin his little quest.
Chapter Two: The Kokiri Sword
Link, ran and found rupees scattered all over the gruesome mud and grass and picked them up, link walked to the little kokiri shop, and walked in. There were two girls standing on each side, and the tiny little shop owner at the desk. Link pointed at the item he was looking for
''The Deku Sheild'', link grabbed the shiny wooden sheild from the owner, and placed it on his back. This was it, time to get the koriki sword from the lost woods, he ran out of the shop to the lost woods, he heard sarias song while he was going in the lost woods maze. He found the place he was looking for, he saw the 'altar' witch held the kokiri sword. It was gone! link looked shocked, saria would not be happy, Link heard something for behind his back it was 'Ganondorf' ''Ganondorf: Heh heh heh you, pathetic little kid, this sword is useless would you mind if i brake it? MWUHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA'' Ganondorf dissapered into dust, and linked looked shocked, the sword was broken, link thought saria was going to kill him, but unfortunely it wasn't his fault.
Chapter Three: The Broken Sword.
Link walked back to, saria's cozy cottage feeling really depressed. A fairy fly's down from the shallow sky, the fairy was Tatl?!?! Link put on a shocked face, tatl told the fairy boy how to fix the sword.''Tatl: Link? Link? Is that you? its me tatl the fairy, do you want to know how to fix that sword?'' Link nodded, and tatl told him how to.
TO BE CONTINUED
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I Like It
, Now You Got Me Into making zelda storys Well that was billiant. Can't wait for part 2 well done -
Thanks To Everyone Who Helped Me!.
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Plz Help Me Where To Get The Gilded Sword On Majoras Mask P.S No silly comments,.
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Like If It Was Released On The Wii,It Would Put More Effort In The Game And Like Add Some New Features Do You Agree With Me,?
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Guys Today I Need To Ask You, If You Could Help To Ask Me Where You Go To Get To The Pirate Fortress?
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it was kinda of great, but... i think the game got kinda old and way to hard
i picked best game ever lol cause it was a kinda cool game tbh -
ok thanks
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alright guys i need help do you know how to get the lens of truth in mm?.
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( 541) sneak behin him get a sword and cut his head off!
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sneak behin him get a sword and cut his head off!
A Story
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My story so far I've kinda improved in the few past years so ya know enjoy please no hateful comments.
A Story by JayRAWR1
This is it so far more chapters to come
You can put hateful comments about the chav bit I'm not being rude to them it's just my story.
A Story.
Prologue
The Story I’m about to tell is not ordinary, it’s strange. My name is Connor Blue, I’m just a ordinary schoolboy living a peaceful life but I’m not so ordinary I’m a half-vampire just like that Darren in the Darren Shan saga. They’re awesome books. My dad used to read some of the manga comic version to me at night, I ignored the scariness of those books and had nightmares, and my dad stopped reading them to me when I told him I was having nightmares. But now’s my turn to tell a story as a half-vampire.
Chapter 1: Morning.
I woke up at 6.am in the morning to encounter some toast on my bedside table, my mum must of made it for me. She always makes me toast on a school week but my favourite bacon sarnys, I had to wait until the weekend it was so typical. When I woke up I had my bed hair as usual, I looked into my mirror an done my hair like I always love it. I walked over to my wooden cupboard and pulled the handle to open it, I took out my muddy tie and white t-shirt (at least the t-shirt was clean) I took my pyjama top off and slipped on my school wear. I also took my grey trousers out which had a blood stain on it from when I accidently slipped on some glass yesterday. I put my trousers on and grabbed my rucksack hanging off my coat hanger. I took my plate of toast downstairs and went into the kitchen to eat it. After I ate my toast I put in the sink. I walked to the living room and said to my mum ‘’Bye Mum! Oh! Before I go didn’t you say you had to pick me up early today?’’ My mum replied with a smirk on her ‘’I’m not picking you up early today Connor because the hospital cancelled the appointment due to breakdown’’ I had a kind-off happy face and said to my mum ‘’Alright then I didn’t mean to bother you by the way. Bye!’’ I walked off towards the door and opened it. My school was faraway and I had to take a number 93 bus there. I walked along to the bus stop and sat down on the red bench, I was very popular at my school though some people were jealous of me. While I was waiting I got my rucksack and unzipped the cover. There were a lot of stuff in my rucksack like Sweets, Work Stuff and basically garbage. My bus had arrived and took my oyster card out and stepped in the bus I put my oyster on the slot and it beeped. I walked right to the back and sat on one of the seats. 3 stops later a bunch of chavs came on an they decided to sit at the back too. I got up and went into another seat. They spoke to me ‘’ Aright’ yeah why you move? You scared of us?’’ I ignored them and they ignored me. When it was my stop I got off and arrived at my school.
Chapter 2: Extraordinary Events.
I walked into my cramped classroom, it was bloody small and the classroom was taught by Mrs Frankenstein. I didn’t care about school even though I was popular, sometimes my friends really annoy me, and they always talk and are they loud. It’s like a Britain’s got talent buzzer. Mrs Frankenstein gave us worksheets which are like year4 work. One of my best friends Ryan approached me, and told me that my other friend who was practically a computer nerd got stabbed when going down the road to Rackis Sweet Shop. In a shocked way I replied to Ryan ‘’ Bloody hell!! No wonder why a computer nerd would get stabbed, anyways I feel bad for him. Everyone hated him but we couldn’t do anything about it.’’
‘’Maybe we should visit him, he would be eventually surprised to see us, at least he has got some mates he’s not alone.’’
Mrs Frankenstein turned around to write on the green board with a pure chalk. Ryan and Connor sneak out of the classrooms door quickly. They ran down the corridor, got their locker keys and opened their lockers right next door to each over and got out their rucksacks, they ran to the entrance of the school and found it locked.
‘’ CRAP! What we gonna do now its friggin locked!’’ Ryan shouted
Connor spoke quickly ‘’ Look theres a window we can climb out. But we gonna have a graze cuz that’s where the stairs are that lead to the janitors room bugger!!!!’’
‘’Connor what the hell did I tell you I hate getting hurt’’
‘’Ryan mate stop being such a pussy if we want to visit our mate this is our only chance.’’
‘’Alright alright! I’ll take the risk but it’s your fault if I get hurt!’’