Kaigaishi

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  1. sorry i didnt get this 1 out when i said life got in the way but with that aside here is my next chapter plz comment want to know if people think its a good story

    Chapter 2

    The man looked around some more at all the signs that were up, not one could he read. But with each sign was a picture that he could understand. He saw a picture of a target and quickly deduced it was a place for target practice. The door near it has a symbol of a drink glass above, so he guess out it was the bar of the town.

    He walked around town a couple times doing his best to figure out each sign, the ones he couldn't figure out he tried walking in to learn by talking to the people inside. However, he was attacked on sight when he walked into the place where people were practicing their swordplay. Apparently they believed he was a training partner because of the sword he carried, but after he defended himself we was quickly kicked out by the master.

    After a couple more mishaps similar to this, one where he ended up winning five emeralds in a little game, he managed to walk into the town shop.


  2. Chapter 6

    Squad 27 approached Uria Castle furtively and quickly with weapons ready. They were ready to break into the castle and surprise the enemy. They had studied the schematics of the castle and determined this was one of the four ideal spots to strike from. The other four squads they were cooperating with struck at the other points. They expected resistance, but found all resistance was on the ground dead when they entered.


  3. here is the first chapter of my story. i will post new chapters about once a week. however if some1 can guess who and where the man is before the next 2 chapters i will write and post the next 4 chapters that week. plz comment

    Chapter 1

    The waves beat innocently on the beach; hiding the destructive power they exhibited during the night. The sun shined brightly down also hiding the storm that had raged only hours before. A group of travelers were traveling the beach, examining its beauty and learning of its history.


  4. ok this is the second fanfic im posting. me and some of my friends decide to write this about 2 years ago, and i felt that after all that time of writing people other than we who wrote it should a chance to read it. Unfortunately I didn't write a lot of chapter, but my best budd is great at writing. He has writen tons of chapters well over 40 of them; so im going to post some of his chapter on here. If you guys like them plz tell me and ill post more of the chapters.

    Chapter 1

    It was graduation day. The sun was shining brightly in the morning, the grass was green, and a new year of ninja has emerged from the academy. Asahoshi was one of those ninja. While waiting for the squad division list, Asahoshi remembers the days at the academy.


  5. this is possible the cool fanfic i had very read out of anything. i love it some much that it casued me to make my own account in the hopes of making a fanfic that is almost as good as this 1


  6. After reading multiple FanFics on this site, I decided to make an account and post a FanFic of my own that those stories inspired me to write. This is my first one so please don't rip it apart too badly. The beginning is meant to keep the readers in the dark.

    Prologue

    The winds were blowing hard in the day that looked like night. The clouds were so dark that one could hardly tell what time of day it was. A large ship was sailing across the ocean on this horrible day as waves were slamming up against its haul, as its passengers were being rocked back and forth within their rooms. But one man did not even care about the weather, he stood at the rail of the boat and watched the waves form and hit the ship. His red cape waved violently behind him as he continued to survey the battle that raged on between the ship and the storm. One man came up from the captain