Pumpkin

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    (( What's up dudes and dudettes? I've been on a fallout 3 kick lately, but I will come back any play with y'all soon. I'm sorry for being gone so long. I just sort of hit a snag with my writing...))

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    I still sort of want to run this, but I have yet to find a good group of people interested. If anybody wants to apply still, feel free. I'd like at least three races when we start. If we can get all five, that'd be splendid!

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    I understand that this was an old movie and that you had a very limited budget. You probably also weren't allowed to travel somewhere else for a better location. The one thing I want to say, however, is that you could have edited this movie and cut it down a good deal. You could have also cut out the parts where the camera person's finger slipped into the shot. It didn't need to be nearly as long as it was. The little boy at the beginning was adorable, though.

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    Interesting twist off of chapter three... It would probably be better if you eased up on the sugar before trying to do a critique. You get a little too spirited and write crazy spin-offs, otherwise.

  9. Posted

    I know it seems kind of pointless to post something without more fic, but I'd like to inform anybody who had the slightest bit of interest in my story that a new chapter will be done by the end of this month.

    Just thought I'd throw that out there.

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    (( I actually think this is a great character. Very well written, and his age plays into why he would know what he does, instead of him being some little teenager and somehow knowing everything there is to know about fighting. It's very refreshing. You may want to pull the hand grenades from the profile and just go with a small bag of bombs like Link might have. It makes it feel more like TP to stick with bombs. I'd also love to hear more about his tribe and what they were like. You can describe them over time during game play, I'm sure. Including Ashei in the beginning would give your character a little more depth into his past and is very smart. I'll love to see how they interact with one another, even if it will be for a short while.

    I approve because this character makes sense. The person applying actually gives the character time to learn what he knows about the world and combat, and I like that. ))

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    "Yes. It is the only way to get into the village, unless you sprout wings and fly over the walls." the woman glanced toward the sky, the sun already moving along and indicating the waning hours of the sun.

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    Zelda smiled faintly at all of her subjects and sighed gently, "You all are very kind."

    Juna gathered the princess' attention for a moment and pointed to the house that sat the furthest back. "I hate to interrupt you, but we should lodge in there as soon as we can. There is no telling who knows about this area, and I wouldn't want them to see us walking in the street before we have time to defend ourselves."

    The princess nodded quickly, then as she looked back at the girls, Juna spoke again, "We should move all of the wounded into that building, then the able should come with me and help find food where we can. Once that task is finished, I think it would be a good idea to take up posts around the town to try and scout the entrance from the cave and soften the blows of any malicious groups that will try and attack."

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    "...she never returns my calls, never is on facebook anymore, and when she does pick up on a call she asks if she can call me back and never does..."

    She doesn't hate you, but I think she is probably trying to avoid you because you call her too much and are putting too much pressure on her. People tend to avoid others when they feel overwhelmed by them. Lay off her for a while and stop pressuring her with this 'furthering the relationship' stuff and move onto somebody else.

    Nothing is more annoying than a boy constantly bothering you about dating him or hinting at going on a date. That was actually probably the reason she told you she was going to date next year, so you'd leave her be for a while and she could breathe.

    "...I have the back-up plan that turns her negative feelings to my gain."

    Wow. (read this over again) This line and the other post where you are talking about manipulating people's feelings against them (like saying how depressed you are JUST so a girl will date you) is really,really creepy. If any girls you were interested in saw this thought process put into text, they'd be avoiding you at all costs. Just throwing that out there.

    It makes you sound like a Sociopath.

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    Ha! Now I feel foolish. I should have lurked more before putting this up.

    but you're right about NoA, they're basically only the translators after a game has been put out, not the development team.

  16. Posted

    http://www.escapistmagazine.com/news/view/93128-Nintendo-Lays-To-Rest-Zelda-Timeline-Mystery

    I very recently found this. I wonder if it changes anyones mind about when and where all of these took place? Is this old news?

    It really doesn't answer any of my own questions, seeing as that I thought every Link for every game was an entirely new Link anyway. I wanted to know which Link was supposed to be the very first Link out of all of them, and which was supposed to be the most recent/last Link in the storyline.

  17. Posted

    I have a feeling I'll like this new game a lot. I enjoyed TP's graphics, and I think it's about time Link matured a bit, too. Though, he doesn't look that much older than TP Link who was supposedly only seventeen years. I'm kind of hoping they move this into the beginning of the industrial age and use trains and stuff. That would be exciting, even if his garb doesn't suggest they'd be traveling that far in time.

  18. Posted

    Hey :3

    I've read your prologue, and I think maybe you should try to not make his emotions and words so stiff when he finds his entire family dead or just about to die. He'd have more to say than 'Everyone!' when he finds them ((Even a horrified "No!" would suffice)). While a single tear can be symbolic or to show he's tough somehow, any real child would be crying their eyes out. You know, with their face contorted and beet red with snot and everything. It wouldn't be pretty, but it would be much more realistic.

    Just my two cents! I hope you don't think I'm a jerk or something.

  22. Posted

    Oooh.. I saw you talk about football practice in the talk thread, so it lead me to believe you were on the football team.

    A guy in band getting bullied makes more sense. So much so that it's a pretty predictable high school stereotype.

    I, personally was an art/choir nerd. I also went to school with kids who were stupid and could only come up with "four-eyes" as an insult, thus making the other kids look at the person like they were a moron.

  23. Posted

    Wait... You're on the football team and you get bullied? Something is very wrong with this picture.

    Either that, or our school only let guys on the team who took massive amounts of steroids... Those guys were HUGE and could tackle a freaking rhino.