The Lonely Dragon

[pheonix561 2080]

Okay, so, for creative writing we had to write a kid's book. So, I did. I got a 58/60 on it, which I think is a 97, so, I did good.

then I showed it to a couple friends of mine, including Sahaqiel, who then encouraged me to give it to the internet. Which I am doing.

however, my scanner sucks and didn't get the entire picture. So the text for the picture is above the picture and things are cut off, and they're all rotated at funny angles and all that. Sorry.

In fact, Silver Teto was nice enough to redo it himself because he has balls the size of manhatten.

now wasn't that a lovely story boys and girls?

[Chase 390]

Lol oh my gosh!

This tugged at my heartstrings! I mean, every second I was like "what's gonna happen next?!" and then the finale was like..whoa. I cried. I cried so hard I shook. Every second of every moment, I was in love. I fell in love with this story. It's as if you can look deep into my soul and grab my soul's crotch and just go to town. This is simply a masterpiece. You deserve every award you get with this. Screw that teacher, a 97? HOW DARE THEY. I'm about to go to their house and rape them because of it. This is the best story ever and you are the greatest! I'm your biggest fan!

Love,

Lionheart

[Teto 2609]

This page is making my computer freeze.

also, had some time to kill btw.

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[Sahaqiel 1232]

Fo sho.

This is the best children's story ever.

I think you could sell this type of thing.

Sahaqiel

[pheonix561 2080]

woah. what is this voodoo. saha are you editing my posts?

[Arcane 12]

That was great.

[Teto 2609]

I like how he burns them and then eats them alive.

Also there was a typo on there, but I copy pasted what you were saying so it's your fault :c

Also, I noticed it screwed up. For me at least.

[Sahaqiel 1232]

Yeah, I edited it.

Sahaqiel

[DocHobo 0]

SPOILER TAB PLEASE

or as an attachment

The picture is huge is all

[Teto 2609]

It's the point of the thread incidentally. So it has to be visible. :c

But yeah, spoiler tags would be a good idea really.

[Jareddude 62]

Cute.

[Cirt 612]

This is adorable. <3

The artwork is like so simply cute.

[randomfan 0]

It's very cute. And has a moral that is....different from the norm, shall we say. But at least I finally know where your signature comes from.

[Max 10]

Why did I not read this until now. It's incredible.

I saw a hint of Flight of the Conchords in there.

[Cirt 612]

Why did I not read this until now. It's incredible.

I saw a hint of Flight of the Conchords in there.

I did too. Albi the Racist Dragon?