Posted 25 Mar 2010 Your poem became awful the moment I read "OMG! could this be? The Hero of Time?" You can't use chat speak in a poem and expect it to be taken serious. Unless it's a poem that uses chat lingo as satire. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 25 Mar 2010 Just fix that line. I'm sure it'll be better. I just can't get past that. I mean, it's about Link, right? Why would Link say "OMG"?? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 28 Mar 2010 you cant do a poem without knowing psuedo english Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
