In Search of A Smile

[Issa 0]

I really think this is hilarious, and the plot is really well put. Your very descriptive, but I think it's time to add the side characters to the story, (Blake and Rosy, as you've put on the description.) But keep going, cuz now I'm hooked!!

[PrimaGaga 1025]

I'm seriously getting tired of waiting. Somebody please explain to her the problems with her writting. I'd sound mean if I did it.

Oh yea, don't forget to tell her "good" things too! She asked ever so politely.

[Toushi 0]

I'm seriously getting tired of waiting. Somebody please explain to her the problems with her writting. I'd sound mean if I did it.

Oh yea, don't forget to tell her "good" things too! She asked ever so politely.

Uh...... yeah. Maybe no ones telling me cuz they think it'll be too mean like you. FINE! If all of you think I'm a WUSS, then maybe I'll try to critisize MY OWN writing! Let's see.... I don't think I'm descriptive enough... and right now the plot is all over the place, but as we speak I'm fixing that... and uh... I might have some grammatical areas to fix... and I bet there's more, but thats all i can see. Somone add on to what I put. COME ON! IM NOT WEAK!

[Toushi 0]

CHAPTER 4

“That can’t be.

[Toushi 0]

Tell me if their funny, please! Sorry for posting another reply!

[Toushi 0]

CHAPTER 5

 

 

“What do we do?