Posted 3 Feb 2013 that sounds really fun knuckle! I didn't know you were already over in Scotland but I guess it is February and that would make a lot of sense lol. but hey that's awesome Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 3 Feb 2013 Please can someone read my creative writing? It's for school but I'm not sure if it's good or not. Is it descriptive enough? http://pastebin.com/TVhcpRxa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 3 Feb 2013 Incorrect spelling of "breathe" by the way. It's "to breathe" and "to take a breath". Breeeeth (with a "the" th) is spelled "Breathe". But idk, I'm not a brilliant judge. But I feel like the whole description part of it got a little inconsistent. You put a lot of description into when the character first wakes up, but after that it sort of rushes a little. Not a lot is clear about what's going on or why certain things are relevant, and it all seems a bit surreal, like a dream you only half remember. I suppose this is something like a realistic take on respawning and entering a game of COD though? I can't really help you with much useful advice besides my impression though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Feb 2013 Hello guyZ did you miss me oh well SilverAlchemic likes this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Feb 2013 Hello guyZ did you miss me oh well Yes A lot. o: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Feb 2013 Started cat dissection in Anatomy/Physiology class today. I've already secretly named everyones' cats. Also these people are sissies. Cheez likes this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Feb 2013 Not sure wut this is (game. movie, tv show?) but I feel like Pheo would really appreciate it. This is just a trailer for it. The actual website doesn't give much detail to wut the final product will be, but hey, it looks awesome. The site says it's about an urban gender war. http://vimeo.com/user13069567/urbance website- http://steambotstudios.com/urbance/ EDIT- the video wont post? just visit the site. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Feb 2013 Yes A lot. o: Don't worry, that's completely normal. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Feb 2013 Don't worry, that's completely normal. Thanks for the reassurance. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Feb 2013 (edited) Started cat dissection in Anatomy/Physiology class today. I've already secretly named everyones' cats. Also these people are sissies. Ha! Nice. Did you happen to name any of them Bob? Thanks for the reassurance. No problem at all! Edited 7 Feb 2013 by Cheez (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Feb 2013 EDIT- the video wont post? just visit the site. Have you seen me talking about urbance? The guy behind it goes by feerik, and I've mentioned him several times on this site recently, like how I picked up Brink mainly because I knew he was doing the design for it. Brink is a gorgeous game, make no mistake. But the point is yes I've been following this artist for at least a year now. Anyways here's a short film we watched in animation this morning I think you guys will enjoy: Ganny likes this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Feb 2013 OH GOD WHY DID I CREATE THIS ABOMINATION <--- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Feb 2013 I AM DISGUSTED WITH THIS I love it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
