Posted 7 Mar 2013 M'kay gonna post some of my works on here and maybe stumble upon someone that can offer me a job IDK Welp! Gonna start this off by my shameless self-promotion of my new web comic series "A Little Queer Around Here" Here's Page one I guess: by the way you can read said comic here: http://alittlequeeraroundhere.smackjeeves.com/ AAAAAAAND PAGE 2: and finally page 3: cuz i love you guys Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Mar 2013 i feel like your art got more webcomic-y, somehow. noooo idea how that happened, or what exactly is making me think that, but thats what i thought. not a bad thing, just a thought. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Mar 2013 Looks pretty cool. You gonna color it or leave it black and white? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Mar 2013 (edited) This is kind of awkward to point out. I don't know if you already knew and my comments would come off as annoying? Or if you just missed it. But you have a few typos in there. I don't want to be the kind of person who points out other people's typos unnecessarily, but I think I am supposed to be giving feedback, right? -In the first comic's first panel, when the character said "I`m asexual", that's not an apostrophe. In "We've" in the first panel, that IS an apostrophe. -In the first comic's second panel, you spelled "awkward" as "akward". -In the third comic's second panel, I think there should be an apostrophe after "associate" and before the "s", which would make "associate's (degree)". OR people just say "associate degree". -Also in the third comic's second panel, saying "what am I supposed to apply with that?" is kind of awkward. It'd make more sense with "what am I supposed to apply TO with that?" -Also in the third comic's second panel, you misspelled "actual" as "acctual". The art is clean and your characters look consistent. I admire people who put out their own webcomics. I hope you keep it up. By the way, what program were you using to make these? I would often have spelling errors when using the text tool in Photoshop. I don't know if there's a spell-check in Photoshop (assuming were using it). I guess it's for the best, because if it was included, the red squiggly lines under "wrong" words would obscure the image. I wouldn't be surprised if Photoshop did actually have spell-check, though. Edited 8 Mar 2013 by ∟ ∟ (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 8 Mar 2013 I guess it's for the best, because if it was included, the red squiggly lines under "wrong" words would obscure the image. I wouldn't be surprised if Photoshop did actually have spell-check, though. kainda like how if you print out a word doc full of spelling errors, it doesnt print out the squiggles, i would assume that if i had a spelling function, it wouldnt save the squiggle on top of the image, either. that would be kainda silly. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 4 Apr 2013 i feel like your art got more webcomic-y, somehow. noooo idea how that happened, or what exactly is making me think that, but thats what i thought. not a bad thing, just a thought. well it is a web comic sooooo....This is kind of awkward to point out. I don't know if you already knew and my comments would come off as annoying? Or if you just missed it. But you have a few typos in there. I don't want to be the kind of person who points out other people's typos unnecessarily, but I think I am supposed to be giving feedback, right? -In the first comic's first panel, when the character said "I`m asexual", that's not an apostrophe. In "We've" in the first panel, that IS an apostrophe. -In the first comic's second panel, you spelled "awkward" as "akward". -In the third comic's second panel, I think there should be an apostrophe after "associate" and before the "s", which would make "associate's (degree)". OR people just say "associate degree". -Also in the third comic's second panel, saying "what am I supposed to apply with that?" is kind of awkward. It'd make more sense with "what am I supposed to apply TO with that?" -Also in the third comic's second panel, you misspelled "actual" as "acctual". The art is clean and your characters look consistent. I admire people who put out their own webcomics. I hope you keep it up. By the way, what program were you using to make these? I would often have spelling errors when using the text tool in Photoshop. I don't know if there's a spell-check in Photoshop (assuming were using it). I guess it's for the best, because if it was included, the red squiggly lines under "wrong" words would obscure the image. I wouldn't be surprised if Photoshop did actually have spell-check, though. the apostrophe thing is just weird. idk what is up with that. and all the grammar and spelling errors are due to my negligence to throw the text into word and check it all before Photoshop (which does not have spell check) and i will agree that the wording was awkward in that pannel. i wasn't really sure how to word it correctly. :< as for programs i use paint tool Sai and photoshop 3. (hella old i know) Thank you for the pointers though! I went back in and thought i changed it but you;ve shown me more things that need addressing, so i may scrap the project, fix everything and then re-post it.Looks pretty cool. You gonna color it or leave it black and white? I was gonna leave it in the grey-scale. Idk if i'll keep it as suck though. :/*such Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 4 Apr 2013 Your characters are really expressive Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
