A prologue

[Necropolis 763]

So this is something I wrote about a month ago. Its a short story, and a prologue to a bigger story I'd  like to tell. It is more or less unedited. aside from the most basic of grammar problems, so keep that in mind. I welcome all constructive criticism.

 

Hnet kinda went a little crazy on the formatting So i'm just gonna put the google drive link. Thats where I wrote it originally

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cyqNPoBp5lbw5GqjTalxcn4ypata48zFLtaM7yWUodA/edit

Edited 31 Mar 2013 by Necropolis (see edit history)