Posted 25 Mar 2014 (edited) I soon hit the first time disc it felt like I was punched in the stomach!a bit later I hit the second disc it was horrible it felt like I was shot on every limb I had!the third disc I called the triplester disc and it felt like highly compressed air hitting me.And the triplester disc was the first time warp disc meaning I am going backin time for every hour on my watch is a year in time but this wont work I need to go back 3000 year I calculated so I need to go to the next disc.but your thinking that I should be far from where I started right?nope! after the triplester disc I haven't moved at all. since I am going thru time I cant move! I knew this would happen so I made an electric shield on the quodrocoptor so I can move.now I have been flying for 6 hours so I have went thru 6 years now I throttled the motors and went on to the siptor disc now 10 minutes is 10 years! i went thru grammer sites on this one Edited 25 Mar 2014 by hevury (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 25 Mar 2014 Unfortunately, sites like that can't quite replicate actual knowledge of grammar. Again, as I said, if you are truly passionate about this, definitely go the extra mile to learn. You also might want to consider writing longer excerpts so your writing allows for more content and build up, which could allow the reader to connect to the story much easier. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 i am making a quodrocoptor blue print right now Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 well i mean its reference for it here it is Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 There does not appear to be an image. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 i put the url in the thing why doesnt it show? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 If I were to guess, I'd say you were doing it wrong. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 it aint working i put the file url in the thing Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 Have you uploaded it on the internet anywhere? On a website such as deviantart or photobucket? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 That does not answer my question. Have you uploaded it online ANYWHERE yet? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 i ment deviant art here is the url for that http://link2nerd.deviantart.com/art/quodrocoptor-443016261?ga_submit_new=10%253A1395875973 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 i will have the motor done soon wat do you think is it look ok to you brellom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 26 Mar 2014 Well, that depends on whether or not you're asking for my objective opinion as an artist. What I do think, however, is that since your project is primarily text, you don't have to worry about creating these grand extremely detailed drawings of all your stuff unless it's actually going to be a PRETTY BIG PROJECT. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites