The Legend of Zelda - The Sages' Swords

[Du5t1n 57]

By Dinoguy

Chapter 1

It

[.::TheLonelyShadow::. 0]

<_< You HAD to stop, didn't you?

[Gingerlink 2]

just saying now im down to chapter 3 or so, that zelda being the new sage of light is total rubbish, she is removed from the sages, she has part of the triforce and therefore cannot be a sage (something i read somewhere...)

not saying it's bad work or anything, it's just kinda....wrong

[.::TheLonelyShadow::. 0]

:blink: its just a story, not like its going to happen in the near future or something!

[Vio Milanor 28]

it seems cool ^^

Real long though I'll have to read the rest another time <_<

[TwilightZelda 0]

YOU STOPPED!!! I hate cliffhanger endings. Finish it up. I love it.

[Oliver 0]

it was good :D

[Vony 0]

Finish it!

(There is no need for you to go on all caps, dont do it again.)

Edited 18 Jul 2006 by Princess_Zelda (see edit history)

[Oliver 0]

to make him, you have to make me first, and that would be impossible *taps daedric claymore in his hand and looks at him menicingly*

[.::TheLonelyShadow::. 0]

*taps warning button* now now, no arguments

[Oliver 0]

yes mistress *cowers in her presence*

[Aatch 0]

I don't know whether it's just the stories I've read on here, but writers on this forum wite like they're giving a recount, there doesn't seem to be any actual writing, it's like giving a monologue in the same tone of voice and not moving. You need to take big hand gestures and changes of voice and make them into the pace of the story, It sounds wierd, but you need to write the hand gestures into the story, but without saying, 'Big hand gesture' I hope you know what i mean...

[Dusty 0]

uh nice... story...finish it please

[Onox_The_Emporer 0]

You've got to finish this Dustin! It's so cool! Include a part of poor neglected Onox in there will you? Onox is the Twilight King!

[Eka 387]

You've got to finish this Dustin! It's so cool! Include a part of poor neglected Onox in there will you? Onox is the Twilight King!

Onox? Its Zant, not Onox! His name is Zant lol. And yes dustin, plz finish it! I wanna see the thing with the mirrors!!