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~the great journy~

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-chapter one-

the smell of blood was fresh in the air.

Ryu's blade was like a whirling instrumint of death, killing anything within reach.blood splatered across milo's face as his sword severed a the head off an un-aware bulbin,his leg felt as if it were on fire.

"hey!milo! are you alright!?" shouted ryu.

"yea i think so!"replied milo.

"RETREAT!!!!!!!" roared ganondorf.

ryu's daggertail whipped a bokoblin's club out of his hand as it fled."come on milo we gotta get you to the hospital"said ryu.milo struggeled onto epona and ryu climed onto shadow.

the remains of the battle did NOT look good."how many dead?"asked milo."at least 600.maybe more."answered mia.

a few hours later the army arrived back at the kokiri base."thank goodness you arrived home safely"

said zelda.

"oh! milo your hurt"said zelda shocked."yea he got chopped in the leg a few hours into the battle."said mia."i tried to bandage it but there were to many enimies to look away for a couple seconds to attend it"

said mia again."he must get to the hospital imedietly"said midna.she used her psychokenetic powers to lift milo into the air and she floated behind him pushing him to the hospital.

"i'll take care of the other soldiers."said zelda

the next day ryu had his first meal in three days.after his meal he got up,streched,and walked over to the mirror to see just how messed up he really was."WOA!"he shouted.he was really messed up.

he had a slash to the shoulder,several incisions all over his body,a few hundred bruises,and he was covered in blood and dirt. after a couple minutes of stairing at the mirror open jawed he quickly took a bath and got dressed."well.time to go to the hospital." he thought.he walked out the door just in time to bump into mia."hi ryu.how are you doing?"said mia. "good.and you?" said ryu."good" said mia.

they laughed and headed to the hospital together.

yes this is the end of chapter one :cry: .but don't worry chapter two coming within a week! :joy:

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nice story good job

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thanks :joy:

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