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Two Worlds, Two Secrets.

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Two Worlds, Two Secrets

Chapter One

A New World

Cold and soaked to the very core, a girl of about twelve years of age lay unconscious on the bank of a river, having traveled quite a distance, flowing with the river. Her skin is bruised and battered due to collisions with rocks jutting out of the river on her travel downstream. She blinks as she lifts herself off the bank, slipping out of unconsciousness.

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Cool! Great start.

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Thanks! ^_^ The next chapter should be up today or tomorrow.

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Wow :huh: That was awesome.

My fanfic is dumb noone likes it and I accedently took CGs' title by accedent. :cry:

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Wow :huh: That was awesome.

My fanfic is dumb noone likes it and I accedently took CGs' title by accedent. :cry:

it's not dumb! just short....btw Oh Noes it's awesome! :D

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Sorry I havent been able to get this next part up guys! D: I was bombed by post holiday work during school. >__> Anyways, enjoy the next chapter! :D

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Chapter Two

An Uninvited Guest

Link sat up in his bed, half asleep, half awake. He yawned as he rubbed his eyes.

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Awesome work! :D I wanna work on my fan fiction now. ^_^

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plz continue

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Coolio! :D (It's been to long since I've worked on mine...)

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Coolio! :D (It's been to long since I've worked on mine...)

You think that was long? I havent worked on Part 8 of my fan fiction for like 4 months lol

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Ooh, I know this is a dying thread, but I still have hope that you may continue! :joy: Up with chapter three! Up with chapter three! :joy: Come on! Come on!

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That was amazing!!! Keep writing!!!!!

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Take your time while writing and make it fun to read with flowing words. Also, stay in the same word tense throughout. You're pretty good, but you need to edit (and use adjectives).

EDIT: wait a second, this topic is from October! would you people stop digging up old topics!

Edited by quazy1 (see edit history)

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i like digging up old topics :argue:

by the way this is wicked :rockstars:

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This is interesting, Oh Noes. Will there be more? I like how its told from both perspectives.

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