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Gah! Sorry! Didn't see the "Don't post fan fiction here" Thread yet. Please move it.

Thanks.

Sahaqiel

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Holy Crap

That was...

Words can't describe that.

Seriously.

Keep going. If you leave off here and decide not to continue, the suspense will make me find you and murder you. The suspence is already killing ME right now. CAN'T...WAIT...FOR...NEXT...CHAPTER.

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I'm very impressed Saha. Very impressed indeed.

WRITE MORE. NAO.

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You already know that I freakin' loved it when you first showed me. <3

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Gah! Sorry! Didn't see the "Don't post fan fiction here" Thread yet. Please move it.

Thanks.

Sahaqiel

good story.

nice detail.

you must continue it.

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Wow i really like it. The story has so much detail to it. I cant wait till the next chapter.You got a really good story on your hands.

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SAHA. MORE NOW, UN. DDD: FORT WANTS TO READ MORE.

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Write MORE! : DD

It was soo good, dear.

I still will now think that Alex = Saha. From now on. AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL WTF.

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I'm more than sure I never went through half of this. >_<

He doesn't even have most of my personality. Well, he has the loved one thing down and the knifecombat thing... And honors Algebra problems... BUT HE IS NOT ME.

And Fort suggested the name. I didn't even notice the resemblance in names.

Thanks for the comments, though. I may have one or two chapters up today. I have a lot of ideas.

Sahaqiel

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owo; Creepy towards the end. But you managed to write death pretty well. ^^;

...

I stand by what I said.

Those police cops was mean.

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Wow. You could totally write a book. Like, A WHOLE book. This is Awesome. With a capital A. Favorite part:

There were cats watching from the edge of the scene. They eyed Alex's body curiously. A few meowed and licked their paws. One of them leapt onto a garbage bin and curled up, viewing the scene. Its whiskers twitched. Nonchalantly, it purred and stretched on the lid of the container. A voice sounded off. "Ah. He's died. None too soon. She's about to have a breakdown down there." Another cat responded to the sudden noise and leapt off the roof of the building it was occupying. The felines scattered to do their business elsewhere.

Just...awesome. Talking cats = win. Cats talking casually about people dieing = Double win.

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.___. I PICTURED IT, UN.

I PICTURED IT ALL, LAWL.

RUN, ALEX, RUN. I'M COMING FOR YOU.

And you, too, Saha. Never forget.

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