My first Comic

[Dante_Decem 0]

Do not expect this to be good AT ALL! It is my first,and is made on paint....I just need constuctive criticism. thanks http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e15/GANON14/di5pd5.png

[The Minish Link 1]

That's real good.

That's pretty good, actually. Paint. Yeah right. I can tell those are sprites. Anyway, nice comic, always wanted Link to face Sora. You could've made the print (font, whatever you want to call it) larger though, but good job, good job.

[Dante_Decem 0]

Do not expect this to be good AT ALL! It is my first,and is made on paint....I just need constuctive criticism. thanks <a href="http://hyrule.net/external.php?url=http%3A%2F%2Fi36.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fe15%2FGANON14%2Fdi5pd5.png">http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e15/GANON14/di5pd5.png</a>

Thanks, it only took me about 15 minutes, so, I consider it good for that amount of time.

[Glitch-Matrix 0]

I..... don't..... get it.....

But that may be because I can't read any of the text.... can you please tell me what they're saying?

[Sentri 1]

is sora ok?

[Dusty 0]

it was tight im a fan of loz and kh so yeah

[Relean 1]

The drawings are pretty good, but I can't read the text.

[ZuZu 10]

overall good job but i do have some pointers.

tip 1 -

dont make your picture files .png, these files are slower and usually bigger than jpg's

tip 2 -

make the text easier to read, as said multiple times above

tip 3 -

next time, try varying the background a bit. you do not need 4 frames of nearly exactly the same background. and on a related point, you should occasionally do a close-up shot, or a body shot of either character, not 4 frames all at exactly the same distance

[Vivica Todd 0]

You must tell me where you got the sprites!! I've wanted to do a sprite comic all my life!!...Well,I have ever since I found Zeldacomic.net.

[Vanklar 0]

i cant read xP

try to make more big the texts

[Gingerlink 2]

pretty good, but yer, i can't read most of it, lol

[Michael 290]

not bad considering your first

[The Minish Link 1]

not bad considering your first

WHEN THE NEXT ONE COMING ALEEEEADDDYYY?

[Dante_Decem 0]

WHEN THE NEXT ONE COMING ALEEEEADDDYYY?

Wow! well um......... im doing these things on paint, so........and i havent posted one in a looong time...if your all so interested, ill make a new topic and put some on there.........

[Crowned Twili Princess 0]

Nothing came up when I clicked on the link.