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Chapter 6

"What is that on his neck? Did he get it painted? No! Why would he have done that?" Ilia thought, with sweat rolling down her left cheek. Than she remembered what happened the other day. A memory she had tried to get it forgotten. This one memory might have the answer. She remembered that Link had turned into the beast. This thought ran through her head very slowly. She imagined how his eyes looked. His eyes, they had no emotion, except anger and pure bliss. She opened her eyes to get back to reality. "Zelda! She must have the answer!" Ilia thought, snapping her fingers. "Link, do you mind if I borrow Epona?" she asked. Link didn't say anything. So, Ilia ran down the path to Epona. After, she landed back on the ground. She walked to the gate where two guards were blocking her entrance.

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Thoughts are normally in italics since they don't really say thoughts.

For instance.

Link was in a very bad situation. What do I do?, he thought.

Also, you seem to go back to being blunt. (And it's also against the rules to rate your own thread)

In any case, you need to post individual chapters in the ORIGINAL THREAD.

I give you a day before I delete both your previous threads.

Copy and paste them into a post in your original "Link of Twilight" thread.

Sahaqiel

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is that it.

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This story gave me a heart attack.

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Yet another fanfic thats never going to be finished. Why do people start writing fanfics only to go months without posting the next chapter?

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It seems that I've found a good fanfic that never got finished...again...

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