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[Goron Merchant 1]

Rofflecopter. Thanks Sahaqiel.

[Padraig! 103]

FIXED.

[True Gamer 19]

Just read it all. Wow. That's really good. Never read anything like it before. Also, didn't expect it to end that way...haha

[Sahaqiel 1232]

Creepy up to the last bit.

I think there was a real sense of mystery untill you realised it was just a fat guy eating people.

Everything was perfect until the last bit.

But you made a good job of a bad ending.

Ending=Flowers.

Oh. Roflroflroflroflrofl.

Warning level UP!

Sahaqiel

[Padraig! 103]

But it's all ready... at... 100%...

[Sahaqiel 1232]

It appeared different when I clicked it. >(

Oh well.

Sahaqiel

[Specever 1]

It was just... Thrilling... I felt how Edward felt, adrenilene. Fast heartbeat, can't feel my stomach... Incredibly good.

[Grandmaster Phoenix 26]

I found the ending vile. It made my little bro vomit. But the rest was very well written. 3/5 (Would have been four had my little bro not puked)

[Sahaqiel 1232]

"Vile" is not a synonym for "not well written". Something can be well-written and vile at the same time.

Sahaqiel

[Jikklop Byrne 0]

Ew. That's disgusting.

It was awesomecool.

But disgusting.

Awesomecool.

But disgusting.

5/5

[Goron Merchant 1]

I found the ending vile. It made my little bro vomit. But the rest was very well written. 3/5 (Would have been four had my little bro not puked)

Lol. Awesome. Best review yet.

And thank you Jikklop and Specever too.

[Specever 1]

Lol. Awesome. Best review yet.

And thank you Jikklop and Specever too.

best review I ever written.