The Legend of Zelda:Search for the Heroes...

[Cockwaffle 0]

Well, yep. I put it on my MyHyrule, which is under constructiones.

PM me or post here your name to be used (No Links, Zeldas, Ganondorfs, fairies, etc...No one from the games. Like some kinda normal name, maybe?), your Alignment (Good, Evil, Neutral), and if your alignment will change at a point (Good-evil, neutral-good, etc.)

And discuss it here.

Think I should improve on something?

CONSTRUCTIVE criticism welcome.

Link- http://my.hyrule.net/fhqwhgads/

[ZuZu 10]

i recomend writing with more detail & more decriptive words. also, make it longer.

also, i know its just the prologue, so it'll probably be done in the first chapter, but it should be setting up for a story, which it doesnt look like its doing.

[Cockwaffle 0]

Yes, I know. I was at a loss of words last night.

Also, it doesn't LOOK like a story. That will be shown in Chapter 1. That's when it's set up.

[Relean 1]

It's going pretty well...I would give you some advice, but I'm usually better at writing stories in Spanish. I suck at writing stories in English lol

[The Minish Link 1]

Call me Bob, and I shall be neutral. Or my previous name...

[Cockwaffle 0]

Miraculously, I have added CHAPTER ONE to...

The Legend of Zelda:The Search for the Heroes!

Find it here...

http://my.hyrule.net/fhqwhgads/

Constructive Criticism welcome!

[Relean 1]

You're very good at this. But when do I appear? And why is Vio a half beast? I hope he's not a werewolf. Because I'm the werewolf! *cough* sorry 'bout that...

[Cockwaffle 0]

He was whining in chat last night

[Relean 1]

Ok! And I laughed so hard when Vivi was beating the living hell out of you with the plank of wood. LOL!

*coughmaybeIcanbeintheswordfightingcontestcough*

[Cockwaffle 0]

*coughmaybeifIcanfindawaytoputyouincough*

-Vivi put the slightly bloody plank back under her cloak...-

That was pretty good. I liked it.

[Relean 1]

Yeah. It was pretty darn good. LMAO ROFL.

[Cockwaffle 0]

Wait until the swordfight.

Yes, Will WILL sustain more damage from being tossed off of Moriya. Again.

And the contenders in the contest...

A cloaked and hooded figure...

Vio...

Will...

And a bunch of insignificant guys who lose.

I'll write it later.

"WAIT MORIYA! STOP! NO DON'T STOP SLOW DOWN! SLOOOOOOOWWW DOOOOOWWWWWN!" Moriya wasn't listening very well, and stopped instantly. Will flew off and smacked into the door. "Moriya, you really need to SLOW DOWN before you stop. From now on, when I shout STOP, SLOW DOWN FIRST!" Moriya neighed in understanding.

[Relean 1]

Hmm...cloaked and hooded figure...

[Cockwaffle 0]

Chapter 12 is being written, Folks!

Watch for it.

[Relean 1]

You're already at chapter 12?