Shadows of the Heart

[Dark Fire 0]

Disclaimer: I own nothing from Nintendo or the Legend of Zelda series. I don

[Dark Fire 0]

Chapter 1: Shadow

[Issa Kazuma 0]

Very, very well done!! I feel as if I'm watching a show, but I can't help but think of it as an anime show. Let me tell

you this, that each and every day I will check this and MAKE SURE you have written more. This is the kind of stories that I

like, and if someone doesn't, I'll make sure otherwise. I made my own Fan Fiction Story just recently and is now available

to read. I just wish with my heart that you of all people will read it. My story is called "Rune Factory: Frontier". It would

mean much if you would comment on mine. Even though every story that I like on this site are written by boys, I still will

enjoy it just as much. As a girl, I vow to try and make the same amount of awesome stories you have made!!

[Dark Fire 0]

Thank you so very much for your oppinion on this story. I actually get that sometimes too when I read my fanfics. I'll PM you a link to my other fanfics if you want. Alright, here we go with chapter 2...

Chapter 2: Extraction

I look at the highway man that stood before me ten feet away, Alicia at my side. We

Edited 13 Apr 2009 by Dark Fire (see edit history)

[Issa Kazuma 0]

Very awesome!! Please don't take this too personally, but I think that the part when Blade gets out of Trigger was a TINY bit too early. Other than that, I thought it was fantastic as always! I made a different Fan Fic. I'm sorry to have bothered you with the "Rune Factory Frontier" one. I want you to read the one called, "Saiyuki". I'm sorry to just tell you this, but by just reading your own fanfics, I think you'd enjoy the one I'm working on now. I try to make it as funny as possible, so just comment on that story and I'll reply back to you. Thank you so much!!

[Dark Fire 0]

Chapter 3: Siblings & Suspicions

I awoken to the rising sun, finding myself situated next to my sister, just near the path leading to the village of Ordon. I felt that my sword was still in my grasp, but right near the middle of the blade was where it broke. It must have happened when I tried to block the magic blasts from the magician, which failed.

[link959 0]

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

[Issa Kazuma 0]

Once again, BEAU-TI-FUL!!! I love how descriptive you are with what the characters are doing, and the scenery. I can just see it in my mind! I ESPECIALLY love the last part! I just have a feeling that that wasn't Trigger, but Blade!! Heehee, amazing, thank you for writing more, as I requested. Even if you have Writers Block, I'm still willing to wait as long as I need to to read more! I'm sorry, but I have just one more story I was working on, and I was wondering if you'd like to read it...... This story I'm making is one of my best, in my opinion, but I couldn't think of another name for a horse other than Epona I'm planning on calling it... "Demon Yard", because the main character is a demon. I don't know why I add the 'yard' though... anyways, thanks a lot!!! Make sure to comment on mine also!! I want to add one more thing, though. When I mentioned before about Blade coming out too early, I take it back!! That was almost the perfect time to have him do it. Sorry I ever said that!! Also, you have your first crazed fan!!

[Dark Fire 0]

Lol, thanks there Issa Kazuma. And, because of you, I have a reason why I want to continue. Here's the next chapter for you! ^.^

Chapter 4: Legends

Strangely enough, the travel to Ordon wasn

[link959 0]

This is the best fanfic I've read in a long time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[Issa Kazuma 0]

Same here.... by far!! I still love the extra work you put in it (I can just tell!! ) and the very descrpitive writing. There is no room for improvement on your part, Dark Fire. You already have the best talents that I could never have! I just won't believe you if you say your not a professional writer!

[Dark Fire 0]

((I thank you for enjoying this story and, I wouldn't say I'm the greatest writer. My friends can write better stories than me, I must admit. Anywho, here's chapter 5 for you to enjoy! ^.^))

Chapter 5: Twilight

[Issa Kazuma 0]

Oh no!! Trigger's dad BETTER not die! That would be HORRIBLE!! Now I fear for Trigger and his Father. What to do what to do....

[link is my big bro 0]

ahhhhhhhh no he cant die

ops did i sat that teehee