This Azure Sky

[Eka 387]

Here's a very short story that I wrote while I was on Vacation at a Beach last week.

Genre: Tragedy, Spiritual

Rating: T (possibly? I'm on a borderline with this rating. But then again, I doubt little kids would want to read about death. xD;; )

This Azure Sky

The sky... glistened. Is that the proper term? It was a perfect azure colour, with several clumps of fog-like objects scattered across its vast length. Almost as if it was a blanket stretched over the Earth with interestingly-shaped... ah, clouds! Right, I remember; that

Edited 4 Aug 2009 by Eka (see edit history)

[Sahaqiel 1232]

I don't think this is fanfiction... fanfiction.net encourages you to go to some other site they host for original works.

But it's pretty cool. Brings to mind a post human extinction beach scene, which sounds really peaceful.

Has the atmosphere of really being alone in your thoughts.

Good stuff.

Sahaqiel

[Hiro Protagonist 0]

...i like it.

[Eka 387]

Thanks for the nice insight on it, Saha. =) Yeah, I guess I should probably move it from FF.net (when I'm not utterly lazy. xD;; )

Thanks DSTL. ^^

[Teito Klein 0]

I thought that this was beautiful. You must've really searched within yourself to find something like this to write about. It seems like your writing about human nature of remembrance. I thought that this was just simply amazing. Great Job!!

[Eka 387]

I thought that this was beautiful. You must've really searched within yourself to find something like this to write about. It seems like your writing about human nature of remembrance. I thought that this was just simply amazing. Great Job!!

Thank you so much!

I quite literally had nothing else to do the day I wrote it. It was a day during a Beach vacation where it rained and the power was out. So I pulled out my laptop, put it on battery and wrote this. xD

[TrueNinja2 0]

I LUFF it, Its exactly what Saha said.

[Eka 387]

I LUFF it, Its exactly what Saha said.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.