Meeting of the hereos part 4;Goin to find the princess!

[odd 0]

Meeting Of The Heroes Part 4:The Dinosaurs aren

[Cockwaffle 0]

Yeah, uh...

Grammar?

Is Grammar dead? I don't think so.

Quotations. No "Link: Speaky annoying". Use periods. Past tense. Transitions. NEW PARAGRAPH EVERY FRIGGIN' NEW SPEAKER.

Then..

MAYBE IT WON'T SUCK SO HARD.

(God, I'm such a jerk. Oh well.)

[Relean 1]

I'm not reading through all of that...

Especially if what Django said is true.

Maybe you should try to improve it a little bit, Odd.

[Cockwaffle 0]

That's "Link" to you, Rel.

Oh, and I would offer my services of fixing this story up, but, I can't be associated with it.

I hate you, Link.

[odd 0]

Oh **** you Django, if you hate it so muchh then dont read it!

[Cockwaffle 0]

No, I hate you.

I read like..1 chunk the the garble of messed up words.

Not bad. I'd read the rest if it was honestly readable.