The Rise of the Hyrulians

[TwilitPrince 0]

Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Wave by Wave the dark forces of Ganon's army went into hyrule, slaughtering the innocent and enslaving them. Link was merely 3 when this attack on Hyrule occured. Even at the age of 3 he was fiesty, biting the moblins as they carried him off.

Link didnt know it at the time, but ganon knew what link would eventually try to do. to prevent this, he decided to never let him find out about the triforce, or Zelda, or hyrule.He would enslave him until he died.After ganon and his evil army were through with Hyrule, it was nothing but a big pile of ash and ruins. up into the mountains the slaves went, those too young to walk were carried. ganon felt a great sense of pride as they strode away to his kingdom in the mountains.

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12 years later

Link awoke and changed into his usual, dirty, tattered, worn clothes to walk and work seemingly endless hours. Link was now old enough to help be a constructiuon worker and so Ganon forced him to help build a new town. A town called to be called hyrule. He began to work, starting with digging a moat in a 2 mile circle. Obviously ganon wanted a bigger castle. however, while he was digging where the remains of Hyrule was he stumbled upon a small flute.This caused him to remember Hyrule. He found this flute while wandering around his tree house when he was very little.He remembered moblins and Ganon.Link became very angered and screamed.Two moblins that were monitoring the construction ran to him. "What is wrong?" they asked. "get away!" he yelled knocking one to the ground with a haymaker. The other one punched Link. link got very annoyed at this, and knocked this one down too. Only he jumped on this one and started beating him down.Once he was finally out cold and bloody link let up and picked up a rock. Another moblin rushed him with a dagger and Link cracked him with a rock.He then took his dagger and started gathering the hyrulian people for a revolt.

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[Eka 387]

Pretty cool, can't wait for Chapter 2 ^^

[Arcane 12]

So far so good... but isn't the word Hylians?

[TwilitPrince 0]

So far so good... but isn't the word Hylians?

i thought that Link was the hylian and the rest were hyrulians... or are they all hylians?

[TwilitPrince 0]

Chapter 2: Fall of the Fort

Link gathered the people around and he said " Hold firm your hammers and rocks and prepare for freedom. There has to be something beyond this life of slavery.Our dictator, this evil red headed man, is to blame for all of our pain and suffering. Let us bring him what he has brought to all of us." Link points the dagger toward the fort Ganon stayed at. "Lets go!" he says and with a battle roar he runs forward and the others follow, ready and willing to risk their lives for the slight chance at freedom.

They get closer to the fort when a moblin in a tower spots the mob and yells from atop this 'crows nest' "Guards! Guards! The slaves are attacing us!" 1 Moblin went inside a large hut in which Ganon stayed and told him. This is what he had feared for twelve years. Ganon gasped, wide eyed and said "Kill them ALL!!!".

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A legion of Moblins seemingly coming from nowhere started to rush the slaves, the slaves reacted quickly, Link killed three almost the instant they impacted the blade. The slaves bashed them with rocks and hammers, the moblins dropping like flies. however, amazingly, they wanted freedom so bad that noone got so much as a scratch the broke the skin. Quickly they advanced through to the fort slaughtering all the moblins. They entered the hut that Ganon resided in. He was nowhere to be found, however there was a hatch near his chair that seemed to lead under the encampment.

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Chapter preview: Chapter three: Zelda

They advanced down the hatch. It stunk very badly down there and it was hot. They saw no sign of Ganon or any escape route. but they saw a cage... the cage housed a girl.

[TwilitPrince 0]

(sorry for triple post but i couldnt edit my last post) Is this chapter not good enough? Everyone that posted said they liked the first chapter but no one said anything about this one? Am i doing something wrong?