Posted 4 Nov 2007 Thanks. I will be posting the first chapter shortly. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 4 Nov 2007 umm... this is posted in the wrong place. You should ask a mod to move it. Nice prologue though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 20 Dec 2007 Not to bad. I've seen worse around. It seems to me though, that you have written only the prologue in your head. And never bothered to think up an actual proper story line. Your English teacher(s) are not completely stupid. Planning is useful. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 21 Dec 2007 I like the opening can't wait for the new chapter!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites