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Sooooooo...correct me if I'm wrong...the main character hates blondes? I just can't tell, like it seems as though...but I just can't be sure..
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Because everything I believed in has been shot in the heart T^T
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Not gonna name any names
Some of you are just....wow xD
I hope you know who you are, if not...it is worse than expected xD
(Hint: the 2 people with the most facepalming posts)
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I HATE THIS THREAD!! D':
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Lol I kno right!!
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We got to hang out and enjoy each other's company for three hours
Ooooooo next time you should invite me over ;]
Sounds pretty fun
I would looove to "hang out" and "enjoy each other's company," especially if it was for "three hours" ;]
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If this were in Wild West I would sooo have a few...but since it isn't, I don't
Buuut here is the best I can come up with, just look at my siggy <3 ;]
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Rashakaa!!
lawl so fun to say xD
Which is not something you really want
Not good if the best part of the story is saying the character's name, it is distracting xD
You are moving the story along wayyy too fast, which makes it feel awkward.
Sometimes you can throw the audience into a situation they know nothing about but it is really torturous if you don't tell them anythingg and just leave them in the dark the whole time.
Also, try to avoid using the same phrase so close, there are multiple ways of phrasing things
(referring to " on account that she didn’t go to school. She was too smart on account of...")
For me, at least, things like that are distracting and a little annoying.
You have some good descriptions but it feels like you are just trying to get to the next part of the story.
The result of that is something similar to whiplash, movement but then a sudden jolt when you get to the next part of the story.
It isn't great, but it isn't the worst ever xD
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Pheo, that is really creepy D:
Why would I post pictures of my bare belly carrying my dear child on the internet for any creep to see?
That's just disgusting...
Plus I got really bad stretch marks (which are normal!! D:< ) that make me feel really self-conscious :[
Pheo, you ass, trying to make me feel even worse about myself T^T
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No one should ever make Miss Steaks like that
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Yes Ryan x3
<3
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I love how dis troll always says thanks to back-handed compliments and insults x3
It is cute <3
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Hey now, Jared, don't you forget who's thread this is D:<
I'm a pregnant woman and I ain't afraid to cut a bitch <3
And Pheo, if Skyler was so gay, then how did he get me preggo, hmmmm? HMMMMMMMM?!? :3
Just sayingg <3
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lawl trollin trolls who be trollin <3
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Love you Cas <3 ^-^
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The grounded part was a tease towards the new person x3
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But most of the stuff I said was true. I'm 13, my name is Rithium, and I hate Gelp.
Teehee
Noice, even when you get found out you keep in character :3
<3
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"She" is just a troll tho
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Look at the brilliance of that troll there!!
Just look at it!!
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Sex as in gender silly x3
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Or somthingg? D:
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Lol, love you Baby Daddyyy <3
We should totes name our baby after this jtrk person for being such a fab troll
Rawr
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That...that right there just made me lol so hard xD
I love you Golden and Bitch x3