.:Paradise:.

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  1. Posted

    No, I was telling you what to fix.

    Ok, well, in most of these, you either have no flow, or more then 1 direction of flow. Just have 1 direction of flow to have good...well...flow. (Flow was overused just then.)

    Your lighting is terrible. Please, make the lighting so it corresponds with the render. It has to be in the right place.

    Almost all of these lack depth. Remember, you need to keep your render the focal. Make sure that your render is sharp, or your background is a tiny bit blurred. Just, make your renders stand out more.

    The text you use is horrible. Now, text is the hardest part when making tags. Just don't put any text on, or use good text.

    See. I was telling you to fix your flow, lighting, depth and text.

  2. Posted

    Here are 3 examples (Ignore the writing on them):

    nevershoutneverd.png

    ginyuforcebanner.png

    mimizeldasig.png

    2 things. One, these aren't my best, considering I deleted all my pictures like 2 weeks ago, and two, I never said I was so great at them. I was just telling you what to fix. It's called Constructive Critisicm.

    And, I guess I can get around to making a tutorial, but, I won't be putting any images in it.

  3. Posted

    Ugh. People actually like your tags? No offence Storm, but, these aren't what I would call good. Your best one is the below one, but, that's still only Low Novice - Novice.

    shad.png

    Now, you probably want some Constructive Critisicm. Ok, well, in most of these, you either have no flow, or more then 1 direction of flow. Just have 1 direction of flow to have good...well...flow. (Flow was overused just then.)

    Your lighting is terrible. Please, make the lighting so it corresponds with the render. It has to be in the right place.

    Almost all of these lack depth. Remember, you need to keep your render the focal. Make sure that your render is sharp, or your background is a tiny bit blurred. Just, make your renders stand out more.

    The text you use is horrible. Now, text is the hardest part when making tags. Just don't put any text on, or use good text.

  4. Posted

    Why would you want people to see this? You are terrible at creative writing. Please, stop now.

  6. Posted

    This is going to sound stupid, but I don't know how to make the video appear in my post, so here's a link.