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I wrote this for my dead girlfriend

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Melancholy

As the sun fades beyond the great, green, ocean of trees, I sit and watch the caramel clouds dwindle on the edge of twilight. Pensive, and alone, I’m showered by thoughts of you and drifting into distant memories.

I was to be your last, first kiss, but Death kissed you much more often than I did, and, eventually, you succumbed to his lechery. My heart is like a fractured bone without a splint. I’ve no solace, no reinforcements when the soldiers of grief threaten to conquer my soul.

Father in Heaven! Liberate me from these wretched irons of misery and torment. Crucify my solicitude, so that I may never inadvertently dwell on this again. Rather, sap me of my strength; ruin me; wither me away into oblivion, so that I may join my beloved across the chasm!

I receive no reply, save for the soft thump of my broken heart. Time agonizingly marches on. The sun has disappeared into the pitch black, and the caramel clouds are far too dark to behold now. Pensive, and alone, I’m showered by thoughts of you and drowning in melancholy.

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The most beautiful poem I ever read, and I usually don't get poetry.

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When did your girlfriend die? How?

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Wait what

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Awwe, i'm so sorry :'(

On the upside, that was a beautiful poem....:)

:cry:

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You have to admit LL, this is a pretty legit poem I wrote. This could go somewhere.

But yeah he's right Jared and Pheo, I don't have a dead girlfriend.

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...You're a fail. Lol jk.

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lawl I was like, Chase, I talked to you like two days ago and you were NOT in a pit of despair

good writing though

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How did I fall for this

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But seriously after writing this I felt like I had a dead girlfriend.

I need to go write something happy. I may post it.

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