Rhyme zone

[Sydney 0]

Hey guys I really like poems and raps and I'd like to read some of them by you.

I'll think of a rap and if it's finished I'll post it.

Happy rhyming.

[Sydney 0]

OK here are my lyrics:

Zelda is the best game I've ever seen.

As early as I was 6 I liked the guy who wears green.

I plaid a link to the past and ocarina of time,

don't worry about the graphics cause the story is fine.

And if someone says you're a Zelda nerd I just pull on my green t-shirt.

Come on let everybody know I love Zelda the game until the end of the row.

Cause it's the best game series I'll ever know.

Hope you all understood my flow.

I'll post more such stuff later.

[ZuZu 10]

I write alot of stuff.. mostly lyrics and that sorta stuff dont have many completed works, and alot of them have swearing etc so I wont post, but they're decent. My personal statement in my profile is a lyric I wrote.

Dont have any Zelda lyrics though

yours is good!

[Sydney 0]

It don't has to be a Zedla rap or something like this.

You can post what you want to.

[Relean 1]

I too write songs.

Rap or reggaeton.

But they're all in Spanish.

EDIT: Hey, Zuzu, is that a rap song?

[Ganny 285]

I write a couple o' rediculous poems..... there's one on myhyrule, I'll post it if I get around to it....

[ZuZu 10]

I too write songs.

Rap or reggaeton.

But they're all in Spanish.

EDIT: Hey, Zuzu, is that a rap song?

Havnt decided yet, it could go rap. I generally write lyrics without thinking about what style of music its going to become, I just write.

[Sydney 0]

If this would be a Germain side I'd make sssssssoooooooooooooo many poems but in English it's a bit difficult for me.

[Sydney 0]

OK a new one from me but there are many harsh words in it.

The other guys want to fight me

The police doesn't like me

But I really like this rap game

cause in Germany only counts the puppying fame

and it's ashame,

to see little kids selling speed

but why they do that?

They just need something to eat.

sure they all want piece on this god damn streets

but they just don't know what it really needs

and this poo goes on, and they keep selling weed

And I'm talking about those guys,

not about me

but no one outside wants to hear that story

the only things what the politician want are guts and glory.

I've seen an eleven years old boy loading his glock

then he ran inside a house

everybody screamed ****

Bog Bog!!

and the gun shots two times

and that's no lie

I've seen it with my own eyes

and I can't make you believe it.

I just can try.

This boy died and I'm sure you want to know why.

I think he was just high

and I hope he's in heaven and not in this puppying hell.

cause crack sells doesn't make those homies living well.

I once had a homie.

his name was bob

his father was an alcoholic

and dealing was his job

he was mister cool

on this little block

but a man visited him and this man had a glock

he didn't use his gun

he pushed him out the window

and everyone who saw it

said bob was high

and smoked endow

And I hope you all understand this

what it means to grow up in this world

where everything is scandalous.

I hope there is not to much swearing.

I really tried to stop it

but everytime I start to rap

I'm thinking of 2pac poo.

lol:).

[The Minish Link 1]

.....Whoa.

No offense, but I think Sydney has better english in his rhymes than he does in posts....

Hm...Let me think of one....

DARN! Can't think of anything!

Ah well.

[Sydney 0]

.....Whoa.

No offense, but I think Sydney has better english in his rhymes than he does in posts....

Hm...Let me think of one....

DARN! Can't think of anything!

Ah well.

Is that good or bad??

[Sydney 0]

OK another one.

I was at home with my girl.

We watched a movie.

And the name of it was "end of the world".

Everybody died and that was the end of-it.

I said "I hate this movie" and she said"I love-it.

She said"I'm sure that wasn't the reason for your visit".

She said"you want some right?

Then come on with-it".

She kissed my lips and I grabbed her hips.

Then I fall back and she was sitting above me.

We were kissing us everywhere, fast and slowly.

I thought"nothing could be better, even to win a million.

But I won't tell you more cause it is not for children.

I know that one wasn't as good as the other one.

[The Minish Link 1]

Is that good or bad??

I TOLD YOU IN MY PM!!!!!!!!!!

[Sydney 0]

I know.

I've started this replay before the PM thing.