Sign in to follow this  
Followers 0

Ultimate RP

948 posts in this topic

Posted

XD

yea.

Meanwhile, somewhere in the Ocean, Niel was laying on a raft, an old man with a cane stood next to him. The raft was tied to a dock, attatched to a small cave. Niel Sat up slowly holdng his head. "Here now." The man slowly and gently layed him back down. "Where am i? Who are you? i don't remember anything...." He held his hands over his face and groaned. He ached all over, he didn't remember anyything, he didn't even remember who he was. "Do you remember your name?" The man asked him. Niel shook his head. "I don't rememeber anything...." he tried to roll over but the pain in his side was overwhelming. "You had a nasty fall, i wouldn't try moving if i were you."

"Who are you?" Niel asked again. The man shown a brilliant yellow light, for some reason, Niel knew to look away, or something bad would happen. He looked back and saw Zeus standing there, his cane was gone. In it's place was Thunder Niels electiric sword. "Im Zeus, remember?" He handed the sword to Niel, who grasped it tightly. The electricity gave him strength, great strength. The pain was gone, and he could remember his name. "My name's Niel..." He said, getting to his feet. "I was escorting a group of heroes...to defeat...Sundim?" he asked. Zeus nodded. Niel almost smiled, but remembered the Fishserpent and grimaced. The pain started coming back now, he alost fell over. But Zeus grabbed him. He sat down on the dock to try and clear his head. he remebered Anna, and Link, and Zelda, Ness, Lucas, Darunia, Spiderman, all of them came rushing back like a wave. "I have to get to the cstle, what time is it?" Zeus looked at the sky. "Time for you to be going." Zeus disappeared in a burst of light, and now attatched to the wall was a ladder that lead two miles up, back on the land of Denelm. He sighed, sheathed Thunder in it's new Golden black sheath, and started climbing.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

YAY NIEL'S NOT DEAD! XD

The band of heroes were now in the castle, searching every nook and cranny, while hiding from Sundim's guards. Ness and Lucas came across a grand hall, brightly illuminated by many chandeliers. "Woah...its so...so pretty..." commented Lucas. In the center of the room was an extremely long table, chairs set on each side. "Its a looks like huge dining room. D'you think it could be in here?" Said Ness as he looked under the table. "I dunno...but its pretty." Lucas said with bright eyes.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

When Ness lifted his head from under tha table he saw Sundim standing at the other end of the table, an evil grin on her face. "Im glad you came, brats." She said, taking a seat. She held up the tiny black stone and set it on the table. Spider man dropped from the cieling and webbed the stone, the moment it touched his hand a flame shot through him and he burst into flame, the stone dropped onto the table, and slid across to Sundim again. She picked it up, and waved it around, "Looking or this?" she asked, she set it on the table and whistled. The rest of the group was drug in by the guards. Gagged and bound.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

Ness was appalled at how quickly they were all caught. "GUYS! I DIDNT TELL YOU TO GO RAMPAGE AROUND NONSENSICALLY! You were supposed to SNEAK around. SNE--"

"Oh, shut up you whiny little priss." Said sundim Sharply.

"DONT. CALL. HIM. A. WHINY. PRISS." Lucas glared at Sundim with an enraged glint in his eye. "Hmph. Looks like we have another one on our hands."

"WHY YOU LITTLE-"

"Lucas, you will shut up if you know whats good for you!" Ness hissed. "PK THUNDER!" "LUCAS, DONT--"

It was too late. The ball of of thunder was already hurling towards Sundim.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

Sundim held out her hand and delfected it. It shot upward and hit the chandeleer. The lights went out and the room was plunged into darkness. There were several quick slashing noises and then footsteps, lots of them. Sundim roared with rage as she commanded her guards to go after them, it was only after she brought the lights back on that she noticed the stone was gone. "CURSE YOU YOU LITTLE BRATS!!!" Sundim yelled so loud the castle trembled.

Niel had just gotten to the top of the ladder, breathing heavily and collapsing every few steps. He HAD to get to them, he had to help them. They'd be lost without his help. Just when he thought he couldn't go on anymore, A woman with flowing white robes appeared infront of him, she took his hand and lifted him up. "A-athena?" he asked, nearly falling over again. She smiled and nodded. "Your task is not yet done young warrior, you friends are in danger, you must reach them before dawn." She smiled, and he felt revived. Full of energy again. "What happens at Dawn?" he asked, her smile faded. "At dawn, sundim will use her power to bring the boneyard to life, all dead things shall return to the land of the living, your world will turn into the underworld." Her smile returned. "Do not lose hope young one." She turned around and turned into a giant owl, "Come, young hero." Niel Climbed on her back nervously, he was never very fond of hights. There was a beating of wings and the shreik of an owl as Athena Carried Niel high into the skys. Within an hour the castle was looming in the distance, the silhouette quickly turned into a giant lit up castle, surrounded by fireworks and dancing villagers. "Why are they happy? i thought They hated Sundim.." Niel asked, staring at the castle. "She has used a transformation spell, to them she is a great and beautiful ruler." Athena answered. "Like yo- uh the view?" Niel asked. She nodded. He blushed, "There!" he pointed to the small group of figures being chased by Sundims guards out the gates. The gates slammed shut, trapping the guards inside. Anna shouted a "YES!!" and put her bow away. Athena went to swoop down, but Niel stopped her. "NO! just follow them get in he clouds." He told her, she nodded and went higher, she could see in the dark, through the clouds, but Niel couldn't see a thing. After a while the sun started to rise. "Dawn..." he said the word like poison, there was no way they could save Denelm now. The very sun seemed to darken as Sundim started the ritual. The small group was sleeping in the ruins, hiding from the guards that were dispatched all over Denelm. The ground started to quake, and three massive dragon skeletons erupted from the earth, causing the small group to jump up, ready for battle. "NOW!" Niel shouted. Athena swooped, she couldn't help the heroes directly. "She did a spin and let Niel fall, He held up his sword, Thunder, and Lighting shot out of it in all directions, a massive lightning bolt hit it's tip from the sky, sending lightning bolts all over the place. The skeletons looked up and roared, they were scared of the flying lightning boy, but their master would kill them if they didn't fight. The first dragon jumped up and snapped at him, but Niel did a flip and cut it's jaw off. the others ran. Niel landed with a very soft thump. The rest had big exited eyes, happiness and amazement.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted (edited)

The group was running, fast as they could from the castle, never looking back, never stopping. They didnt even know the guards were cut off by the gates. Nor did the know of havoc that was about to be wreaked upon Denelm. When everyone finally stopped, they were back at the Ruins. "A-are they still follwing us..?" Link asked, sitting down one what used to be a wall. "I..I dont think so...we ran a r-really long ways, didnt we...?" Sheik replied. "Yeah...god, my feet really hurt now..." said Ness, taking off his shoes.

Edited by Oh Noes (see edit history)

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

Anna and Link were still in the formal wear they put on to sneak in(If I had been able to post that post, you'd know what I was talking about!). They couldn't grab their old clothes, so they were stuck wearing them. Link was basicly fine, wearing a armor small enough for him, but Anna was stuck in a dress. Anna kept of looking at Link then away, then Link again. She blushed. "Link, would you please stop staring at me like that?" Anna asked, rather loudly, bringing attention to herself. Link shook his head and blushed. "Uh, uh, sorry!" he stammered. This caused a chuckle from some of the group. Link just slumped back against the wall and fell asleep. Anna tried to do the same, but she just felt that something was wrong. Something was going to happen. She found herself finally falling into a light, restless sleep. Everyone awoke to the ground shaking. "Oh no...I knew something was going to happen!" Anna yelled, trying to get on her feet, but tripping on the dress and falling on Link. "OOF!" "Sorry Li-" There was a loud roar.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

They all stared at Niel in disbelief, all of them were speechless. "Well?" he asked, "What happend while i was gone?" "WHAT HAPPEND TO YOU!?" Zelda blurted out, unable to control her mouth. They all sat down, and over breakfast he told them the whole story, Ness and Lucas told the rest of the story. The part without Niel. Ness got exited when he talked about Spiderman blowing up, he REALLY hated him. After everyone was done with their storys, Niel told them about Athena, and how he saw Anna's quick shooting to drop the gates. The most important part came soon, the rising of the boneyard. Lucas almost started shaking at this part, he remembered the giant red boned thing, hiding in skulls, tripping over tails. It was a nightmare, and now they're alive. Well, skeletons that move. When everyone was done, they started moving again. If they could magically summon an army, that'd be great. But the only other people who could help them were lost, somewhere in the caves of the Dark Mountains. Ness and Marth had searched everywhere for more heroes, but they didn't find any. They had three options, One:Hide in the mountains forever. Two:Make a quick boat and get the heck out of Denelm. or Three:Stand and fight. Most of them wanted to stand and fight, the ones who wantd to get home said they wanted Zeus to bring them home or they'd kill him. Bad mistake to say stuff like that, in the very instant Mario and Peach finished saying that. A huge lightning bolt streaked acrosss the sky and hit them, they vaporized instantly, leaving scorched grass where the italian couple once stood.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

" Great I nearly drown to help those two out and then they get themselves zapped by lightning." Moaned an annoyed Darunia.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

XD

"They shouldn't insult the gods.." Said Niel, looking into the sky. "If we're gonna fight we need more soldiers, we should try and find the rest of them in the mountains." Said Anna, trying to convince them to do something besides sit around. Niel was the only one who was thinking about it, the rest were just worried they'd never see home again.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

XD

You can ask chef how I broke out laughing when Mario and Peach got zapped.

Anna started to stand up again, but tripped on the dang dress and fell over the...well, what used to be, wall. This brought laughter from most of the group. "Anna?!" Link asked, hurriedly looking over the wall. He pulled Anna up and made sure she was stable before letting go. 'Dang dress..." She mumbled. "Well, I'm going whether you all are with me or no-AH!" She tripped again, falling on Link, once again. "Sorry! Sorry!" She said, the two quickly turning red. The group started laughing once more. "Do I have to teach you how to walk in a dress, Anna?" Zelda asked. Anna rolled off of Link and decided to sit there instead of trying to get up again. "No..." Anna mumbled. "Stupid dresses..." Niel cleared his throat. "We all know that the only way to get home is to defeat Sundim. The only way we can do that is if we get more help, and we'll have to go back to the mountains to do that!" Niel announced. This got them all back in the mindset to get moving. "First things first..." Link started. Everyone turned to face Link and Anna sitting against the used to be wall. "We're getting Anna out of this dress."

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

Niel was originally from Denelm..... :unsure: So he's already ome. He wouldn't be saying stuff like 'WE' and 'US' in the same sentence as 'GOING HOME' :unsure:

Niel lead them to a small village, it was a good thing it was in the direction of the mountains. A kind old woman in a stand bought the dress from her, and sold her...

You decide the clothing XD

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

Niel was originally from Denelm..... :unsure: So he's already ome. He wouldn't be saying stuff like 'WE' and 'US' in the same sentence as 'GOING HOME' :unsure:

I know, but do ALL of them know that?(Don't say yes.) He's trying to make them relate.

The old woman had sent her behind a screen to change into the new clothes. She came out in a tunic-like outfit. It had long sleeves and a pair of, yes, pants to it. It was as dark a blue as the night sky. The sleeves and pants were black. She was now wearing black boots and the lady was kind enough to give her a new pair of glasses. "This is much better... Thank you so much." Anna said to the woman. She smiled. "It was no problem, sweetie. This is a beautiful dress." the woman answered. "Well, are we ready to go?" Anna asked. Zelda was giving Anna an odd look and Link was smiling to himself. "What?" "You're wearing...pants." Zelda said. "You know I was never into wearing dresses." Anna said. "I like it." Link said. Anna smiled at him. "Thank you." "Alright, guys. Not to interrupt, but we'd like to get moving." Darunia said, putting a hand on Link and Anna's should, nearly pushing them to the ground.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted

I JUST REMEMBERED HOW AWESOME DARUNIA WAS!!! :joy:

Ness quickly reminded Darunia that his arms weigh ALOT to humans. He did an embarrassing "oh.." and quickly removed them. They set off again as soon as Anna got all her weapons comfortabley adjusted to her new outfit. They were supprised how far hey made it before the sky went dark. And how they weren't attacked. Niel knew something was up, but he did't want to unnerve the others. Some were having nightmares about giant skeletons while Niel talked to a small bird, named Athena. She reminded him that the whole kingdom was in their hands, he got a little tense ater that, but had relaxed a little after being told the others were safely in the dungeon.

It was a dark starless night, not usual for Denelm, that was always lit up by the moon and a blanket of stars. This worried Niel, he could see the blackness of space. Which meant no clouds, yet there were no stars. His thoughts eventually lead him into a deep sleep and he forgot all about the stars, for his nightmares were far more troubleing.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Posted (edited)

TECHNICALLY, they aren't humans. They are Hylian.(That bothered me how Nintendo said "Transform into Human")

Anna would have been invisible in the night if her amethyst eyes didn't glow so brightly. She and Link always had a tradition of looking at the stars each night, but...they were gone. "That's odd..." Link whispered. They couldn't wake the others. Anna nodded in agreement. "There have always been many stars each night we've been here, it's like they suddenly....disappeared." Anna whispered back. Link and Anna gave each other troubled looks. A starless night in Hyrule always came on a day or before something horrible happens. "Let's hope it's not like Hyrule." Anna said. Link nodded. The two eventually fell asleep with worried thoughts of Denelm in their minds.

Edited by Cat Girl (see edit history)

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Please sign in to comment

You will be able to leave a comment after signing in



Sign In Now
Sign in to follow this  
Followers 0

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.